grandpaslippers

Hello! I'm grandpaslippers and I was reading I thought I saw a few things I could help you out with so here goes! Okay so overall this story is moving ...

Woop, that was fun! Hi, I'm grandpaslippers :) Hopefully I'll be able to give you some useful advice! Overall, it was a fun and easy read. That's definitely a good ...

Hey! So you can call me meg (or grandpaslippers, if it doesn't weird you out ;) ) and I'm gonna give you my best shot at a review :) So ...

Hiya! I don't have much to say, mostly because this is pretty dang flawless. Your descriptions are great, your grammar is literally flawless, and the story itself is fresh and ...

Yowza, that was great! Love it! Allow me to introduce myself - you can call me meg. I honestly can't believe your piece hasn't gotten any reviews yet, because it's ...

Dang man, you got some serious dramatic flair goin' on here! I'm digging it! So anyway, you left me such a lovely review, I thought I'd return the favor :) ...

Hiya! I'm grandpaslippers :D You did a very lovely job! I'm curious about how you're going to turn this into a fantasy/action/adventure. These types of stories fascinate me :) I ...

Hey! Very nicely written! While it was a little... Gray in some areas (pun not intended :D), it kept me interested and entertained and overall added to your style. The ...

Hey! Feelin' a little out of the loop here since I didn't read the chapter before... but I'll do my best :). Your grammar is practically flawless - seriously, I'm ...

Love, love, love. So good! First off, your 1st person narrator - Henry, or whatever his real name is - is wonderful. You have an amazing way of capturing me ...

Hey! That was really cute and sort of just ripped my heart into a million pieces... but anyway :D First off, your title just makes it :). The title is ...

Hi! :D I loved it! You've got my attention on the first chapter, which I know is a hard thing to do. I love how you call Brennan "the hero" ...

Wow! I'm gonna say it right now - as soon as I saw the word, "Dressage" in your short description thing, you had me. I was like, "Ah! A horse ...

Hey! I really liked this little piece! I could tell from the first paragraph that you're a master at painting a vivid picture. I think that's a vital thing to ...