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I like how the title makes sense when paired with the poem. However I am not so much of a fan with the repetition style. Firstly it seems like your ...

This was a very good poem and I loved the format because it gave more of a picture than it would of if it was just plain. It was an ...

I personally believe ANY violence is wrong. I think it's okay to give children a little tap on the hand if they have done something wrong but there are other ...

By the way I wrote this for a short story contest but it couldn't be submitted because it had too many words so any comments would be fantastic. :)

This is a story I have been coming back to randomly since I first wrote it when I was 7 and I'm now 12 so I really hope you like ...

I kind of agree with tgirl because the last line was a bit of a downer for me too. One of the main things for me though is the fact ...

This is an okay poem to me with a true meaning behind it. I can't even tell you how much I actually relate to this but the ending is a ...

I think that it's kind of cute and all but I just didn't really like it that much but then again that's just my opinion so yeah. Keep writing! :)

I don't really get what this poem is supposed to be about so its hard to critisise* it. I you gave an insight or something on what it was supposed ...

Watch the river flow, And carry away emotions. Watch as it makes its way Past hatred and love;' Past sorrow And joy. Watch the river flow As you remember the ...