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I shall review (not really critique) your Nightmares , before I go to sleep, myself. I’m tucked up in bed, so deliciously cosy. Nothing can hurt me. I love 'so ...

Possibly! Obnoxious typing is hereditary, you know. :P

Hah, teasing. Honestly, I haven't the slightest clue what I like to write. Even though I write different things all the time, and like it, still trying to figure out ...

Words.

And.. oh yeah. I like to write. Big shocker there.

Yeah, not really sure why the title is what it is, or why it started out in all caps. Hi, I'm new. :wink: I'll tell you what I'm doing at ...

Now you've got me all reminiscing! I absolutely love the 'magic words' before every verse. It reminded me of the books my mom read to me when I was little. ...

Hm, what an interesting thing to write poems about. (I've seen movies, videos and TV shows, heard songs and stories, read books and articles about Las Vegas, but never encountered ...

I think I'd probably pronounce it neither of the ways you explained. I'd probably try to pronounce it like 'muh-len', as if it were spelled Mullenne, or something odd like ...

I'm quoting my half-awake twelve-year-old sister to start off with: "Whoever wrote that should send that in!" ;) This is was so.. perfect (and yes, I tend to use this ...

I AGREE. Virginia Slim? Virginia slime. A good way to start out your poem. It doesn't begin to heavy, which might've turned people away. Coughing, hacking, heaving, your breath fills ...

Before I fully critique anything, I must tell you that there is nothing actually wrong with your story. It is your classic 'two girls, one guy' scenario, that many books ...