gomer4ik

Oh, my, this is wonderful! Very vivid imagery and great diction, and it actually sounds like somebody is talking to God. I’ll be your faithful slave forever, Until I fall ...

My Lord, may I be faithful with You now? May I confess, and tell You how I was unfaithful with my heart, My soul, my body and my love. I ...

Kool! Sorry! I don't know what else to say! I'm really bad at writing reviews! :( Don't worry! Any review makes me happy :)

Hey there! I love the simplicity of your writing and the beauty that comes from just a few chosen words. There are a few spelling errors, but you've got it ...

Hey! I really like this poem. it has a really nice flow to it. I like the sensory to it. Great job. Thank you very very very much)))))

Hi there, I like the cadence of this piece. It flows nicely. Actually, I just like the whole poem. It's tone is serious, yet romantic, and the imagery is sound, ...

Beautiful. While reading one can feel the charm of the Moon. One can feel it's affection on him. Really beautiful. GG

Sad, but true.... Life it is, what more can i say.. GG

Hi - Well, one can say, that we who write have good imagination and things that we write about never happend in real life. But i say, that all that ...

When night time comes and heat is gone And all you see is him alone It's than when you just realise That it's the time, and there's the right. He ...