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This is a really interesting short story, I like how it turned out in the end, the way it mimics the beginning. I'll avoid nit-picking because I think there is ...

“One… Two… Three…” She was lying on the bed, her hands were turned by palms upwards, and her eyes were open wide. She was breathing slowly and looking at the ...

For me there's one and the only book. In university our professor of English Literature gave us one book, so to say "to read and discuss". That was "The Painted ...

Thank you everybody for your reviews :))) I really appreciate your kind words. You make me write more and more :) At the moment I'm working at one very interesting ...

Amen. God bless you for writing such B-E-A-utiful poem! -------------------- -Jojo. You're welcome :) And thank you for your review :)

I really enjoyed reading that, I've got to ask is that a real story? it really seems like something from real life. It's not a real story... It's totally from ...

The night time was coming closer and closer, and he was feeling some kind of anxiety. Tonight he’ll see her again, his mystery lady out of the dream. Now he ...

We were living together. At first I was counting: 2 days passed, a week passed, two months passed, three years and 6 months passed, but than I suddenly stopped counting. ...

This was sincerely beautiful. . . I feel like it could be a magnet on my fridge or a poster or something. I have to say I LIKED how you ...

Amen. good job! Thank you :)

Hello Gomer! You're relatively new. I hope you're enjoying the site! Anyway, on with the review. First off, I think this piece belongs in the 'Other' section. I can see ...

Hi, I viewed your piece here. To be honest, I didn't like it. I liked it a little bit but it still didn't pull me in. The writing is great, ...

Paris! I longed to you all my life. I wished to plunge into your seething sea. You were far away from me, and finally I’m here at thy feet and ...

This will be interesting to review I think - I'm an atheist so beware :P My Lord, may I be faithful with You now?

I really enjoyed reading this, and loved the content of the poem. There are only two things that just seem to jump out as stange: To your True Love’s kiss. ...