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I stand the grave of Tina McKlur. The type of girl who was just her. She was openly gay So the others decided she would pay They were ignorant or ...

its nice, to the point, short theres a few errors here and there but other then that i love it, good work.

those are really good!

Through out the sees ,- seas beyond the world There lies a place, never seen by eyes It is there as I believe, in the one who'll never leave He's ...

______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Danny and her friends were sitting on her bed staring out the window. It was a beautiful day, the

My nicknames are Mimi and strips. I was born in Chicago, where my moms family lives!!!! I have lived in Philly my whole life though. I was actually born three ...

read my poem abuse first if you want the full thing I come back to the dirty little shack i left her in she is still there. Lying very still ...

My eyes tear up as he walks away again clutching my arm with pain watching his hand print fade away the skin bright red wishing he would come back knowing ...

i like the colors! a very intriguing title and great writing!

I enjoyed it but it was very brief, which worked to some degree but it would be good if you but even just a little more. i appreciated your use ...

I really enjoyed this poem, it was very deep, very thoughtful. it seems like you really thought about what you where going to write. I liked it because it was ...

thanks for the feedback.

i really liked it, it seemed so purposeful...i felt connection because it is true and real not just some poem from the back of someones head.

i really liked it i was grabbed by it so you are a great author i liked the vocabulary and dialog bits, great mix. your really good. (:

you really made me think about how important it s to enjoy someones life my friend died and my mom said we should celebrate her life and honer what a ...