gokubrother

I really can't give you my opinion because I don't HAVE one. It was.. it wasn't monotone. I can't fully comprehend Adeliah's pain in any way, but I do understand ...

I liked it. Nice touch at the end revealing that the whole story was a huge flashback. I did see a few things that worried me though. I got confused ...

Wow. That is... wow. Nice. It's really cool how you wrote yourself into the story, and not just [i]you[i] you. Other "yous" as well. I can easily see how Charles ...

Whoa. I'm impressed. Though I don't fully understand what the poem means, (my own ignorance) I found that it was a very interesting read. Short and sweet. The only thing ...

We all have that feeling of remorse when we are at both our highest and lowest peaks. I'd reccomend working on the flow a little bit more; but there is ...

I really liked the poem. It really hits home y'know? I can totally relate to the feelings expressed but I didn't feel "involved" in way. I hope that made sense. ...