gokubrother

Wow. That is... wow. Nice. It's really cool how you wrote yourself into the story, and not just [i]you[i] you. Other "yous" as well. I can easily see how Charles ...

Whoa. I'm impressed. Though I don't fully understand what the poem means, (my own ignorance) I found that it was a very interesting read. Short and sweet. The only thing ...

Out of all of my poems (not posted yet), I didn't really like this one much. It was written at a very vulnerable point and I question what I was ...

My mind wanders, Nothing. I'm trapped in a prison of myself so demoralized that the concept of freedom no longer Makes sense Jealousy and Madness rear their ugly heads Attempting ...

Wow. I honestly had no idea I could post photos on here. Hmm... Anywho: the pics were nice, but I don't find that they "describe" Puerto Rico very well. Maybe ...

We all have that feeling of remorse when we are at both our highest and lowest peaks. I'd reccomend working on the flow a little bit more; but there is ...

I really liked the poem. It really hits home y'know? I can totally relate to the feelings expressed but I didn't feel "involved" in way. I hope that made sense. ...

I also did find that stanza a little off. Hmm. I'll think of something. But I overall appreciate both of you guys' feedback!

Hello Canis! I'm kinda new (ashamed) anywho, i want you to review a poem of mine. just an opinion on it will be fine. link:

It seems like the story is moving along... slowly. It's pretty good except your story has a lot of grammar issues in it. Other than that, why is Dennis so ...

Ignorance is rampant. Hypocrisy infests the dark recesses of people's beings Why? Why must the truth stand alone and fight a losing battle? The supposed God's light has never shined ...