gokubrother

I would have to say that my favorite Fantasy book (and series) would be A Song of Ice and Fire, presumably book one: "A Game of Thrones." What I love ...

I am gone. Tired of my special Purgatory, I go forth and struggle to reach the light. Forgiveness Is my only salvation. I dream of the land of happy endings, ...

Viva la revolucion, Vale! Diaaaablo. Me animaste con eso. Todavia lo siento. Te pregunto que fue tu inspiracion. Pero ademas de eso, me confundi en algunas partes. Hay unas partes ...

Me fascino! (creo que se esbribe asi) Este poema te quedo super chevere; de la forma que lo escribiste (primero explicando tu arbol, despues la falta del espiritu navide~o y ...

Hmm... Nostalgic. I think I can relate to that. An unfullfilled yearn. I liked it though, but it seems a little monotone. Maybe adding some adjectives will help bring the ...

Me gusto el poema. El tema del mismo no es uno muy comun. Nice! El titulo lo redacto bastante bien, fijate. Algo que me fije y que me gusto es ...

Sinceramente, me gusto. pero hay ciertos puntos que encuentro que no fluyen muy bien tus palabras. Ejemplos: "It's a lonely halo, warming your lonely soul" La repeticion de la palabra ...

I couoldn't understand your poem very well. It took reading it five times and looking at Abid's comment to understand it. It's too short. I didn't get enough time to ...

My first posted poem in spanish, my native language. Hoy mi alma descansa, Me siento como marinero navegando en aguas placidas. Mi ser grita al ser bendecido Por las murmullosas ...

Viajeraaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! ^_^ siempre me gusta leer tus reviews y I'm gonna try adding some stuff (first draft). Thanks for the help Vale!

I posted this for me. Period.

I don't consider myself a poet, for poets are intellectuals that have the power to emulate their feelings into words. With three stanzas they can enamor us, sadden us, or ...

Hmm... Well, first of all: welcome to YWS!! Second: the story. I found it to be nice actually. At the beginning I got confused a little as to the strange ...

I really can't give you my opinion because I don't HAVE one. It was.. it wasn't monotone. I can't fully comprehend Adeliah's pain in any way, but I do understand ...

I liked it. Nice touch at the end revealing that the whole story was a huge flashback. I did see a few things that worried me though. I got confused ...