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Cassandra

Liam : He'd tell the truth, make a big drama out of it like those in movies where the arrested one looks back in that melancholic way. Rosy: She'd cry. ...

Cool story! It kept me entertained and involved. I also liked the fact that it was first-person-narrated. Karma seems an interesting character. The thing I like about this piece is ...

Hey, This was amazing. Though, it wasn't really a story. Maybe a fragment of one or of a novel. I'm sure you can fit this in wherever you need a ...

The Idol Roy auditions for American Idol on January 22nd. The producers like him. He’s worth money. He’s glad he decided to do it. If it wasn’t for his friends, ...

Again, a wonderful story. Not as intense as I'm Not A Monster After All but still loaded with a strong emotion. I felt so sorry for Amelia. . . I ...

Hey! Excellent piece. It was SO intense. I could feel the chill. Yikes. Creepy too. Frank is like the other side of Saul, right? I liked many things about this ...

Oh my God! I loved reading this so much. It's totally relevant; that's what most girls do today to look thin. I liked how Sally lost so much weight, but ...

Hi to you too. New here as well. Trying to make new friends, show people my work, get feedback. I'm almost 15, from Europe, kind of bored with the world ...

Hello, fellow writer. I'm a new member too and hope you feel as fantastic as I do about this site. Okay, about the story, I'd be dishonest if I said ...

I like all the descriptive detail. It really made me imagine the person you were talking about. I also liked the similes, "Like a child". Good job, though I would ...

This is y first post here. Please be good to it.:) Can’t let you go A pale shaft of sunlight poured through the bars of the window. The room was ...