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Hello, I'm Peter, and everybody likes my face.

It all began with a phone call...

When life gives you lemons, press them in your enemies' eyes.

Well, first I have to tell you that the whole idea of this is kind of wonderful. I like romanticism and this is a nice piece, but I think it's ...

Dear John, I’m writing this to you although I’ve never talked to you or seen you because I know you exist and because I am positive that you’ll make me ...

This would have had a deeper message if I wrote it better. Timeline “If you write faster, you may leave earlier than four,” the Economics teacher – Mr. Eco, as ...

Again, I'm asking readers to judge whether this is good enough for a poetry contest. Thanks in advance. The Believer A pair of shady zealous eyes, Chase the soaring of ...

Very imaginative. And very. . . I don't know. Maybe weird but in a good way. It's like giving an advise to a friend, very different from most poems I ...

Very pleasing piece, though I think it would be even greater if you develop it a little. Now, it seems like it doesn't have a rhyming scheme (it doesn't need ...

This was really great. I loved everything. The plot is very strong... I can't think of a way to improve it. It's just right the way it is. Great job. ...

Excellent! I LOVED this! Five stars :)

Please review. I need to know if this poem is good enough for a high-school contest. Legendary (the title is not definite yet) The wind puffs diamond dust, That bleeds ...

The Seventh Door Preface The door cracks. Kurt pushes it further until he has space enough to walk through. Inside it’s dark, but up ahead there are xenon lamps to ...

Liam: " I guess I don't have much to be grateful for. My life was pretty shitty until not long ago and friends keep slipping away between my fingers. The ...

Hey! Guess you're an Adam fan :) I know this song was stuck in my head too the day I discovered it. You did an excellent job though, switching between ...