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Re: Forever Chapter 1
This is good! This reminds me of Twilight, and I suggest you kind of change some of the aspects of the story to make it seem more original. Grammar, punctuation, ...
Sep 14, 2008
This is good! This reminds me of Twilight, and I suggest you kind of change some of the aspects of the story to make it seem more original. Grammar, punctuation, ...
Sep 14, 2008
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