gigirl942

CURLY? I didn't know you were signed up here! Hiiiii! Welcome to Young Writer's Society!

Good job! :D I really liked the concept and the imagery in this. It was like you were slowly painting a picture in my mind using your words. But I ...

This is very good! You did spell "dream" as "dram" in the second to last stanza though.

I have no idea what possessed me to write this but I guess I'll just throw it out there... Enjoy. EDIT: I revised it, using the suggestions of those who ...

This is good! This reminds me of Twilight, and I suggest you kind of change some of the aspects of the story to make it seem more original. Grammar, punctuation, ...

Thank you all for being so nice! I'm currently working with Fellow to make my plot even better, and as soon as we get a good plan I will continue ...

Thank you for replying! I'll keep you in mind!

Haha, thanks again!

I got a book too. I actually finished it and i`m rewriting it. If you need any help i`ll be more than happy to help you up. I can help ...

I'm currently doing a rewrite of a book I hope to publish one day. I really haven't gotten that far...only a few pages in actually, but I really like the ...

I'm not sure if I see how this is romantic fiction... It's a multi chapter. You'll get it when I post the first chapter. This is just the prolouge.

Pretty good, gigi! :D The only problem was that you had a few grammar flaws here and there, but great start! :) Thanks! Could you point out the mistakes for ...

Hey! I'm from California Too! LA to be in fact. Thanks for commenting on my story!

Interesting....but good. I had just a little bit of trouble following who was telling the story, though. Like what you put in the introduction, setting the ground for the next ...

THE GAME OF LOVE (I'm thinking of changing the title to 'Love is a Battlefield) By Gigirl942 Dear Principal Steinback, Due to me buying a house in Palm Springs, my ...