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Re: Untitled
Hey all, I know I havent written in a while so I decided to treat you guys to something new im working on, and if you guys comment, i PROMISE ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: The Hunter: Prologue
Hi. Just another reporter on your fantastic story. I have to say that I greatly enjoyed it and I would love if you could PM when you have more finished. ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Untitled. *Shadie Hollow*
Author's Note: This was a dream that I had a few weeks back and I woke up, scribbled it down onto some paper and put it in a draw. I ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: In Such a Night
Firstly, WOW. I reeeaaalllyyy liked this. It told the story, had an awsome plot and was well described, all round it was very good. Just a few things i picked ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Till' Death Do Us Part..
The rain pooled in the cracks between the uneven cobblestones... like tears the masses were to afraid to cry. Whistling wind filled the empty streets, like screams of the once ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Between heaven and Hell
I really enjoyed this. I thought i was very well done and it made me interested to hear more. Im REALLY ( I use caps coz im excited XD) interested ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Writing: My Release.
Wow. This is really good. Now, i dont write poetry so i can't really offer any advice or anything but i wll give a personal opinion. I really enjoyed it ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Little Miss Photogenic- CHAPTER 5
Chapter Five Ryder ripped his lips off mine and shoved me away. I was still standing there shocked, my arms still holding the shape of his body, my eyes blank ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
Hey. Well. this was great. I have never reveiwed something from one of the "Romantic Fiction" pages but i will definatly be back for more of this. I LOVED it. ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Puppy Dog Eyes
Wow, this is really good. I really enjoyed your "Dream Song" 10/10
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Muarte: Prologue
Ok. Overall. It was good. One thing that did annoy me though was the fact you kept repeating "unnatural yellow eyes" It really got onmy nerves. Other parts were a ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
OMEE!!!! *fan girl squeal!* This was great. A couple of things though. 1. Edward never calls her "Bells" 2. Edward seemed a bit superficial. (i know, he is usually) But ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: First Kiss, edit
Ok. I loved this. It was funny and fresh and the resteruant scene kind of reminded me of Bella and Edward in Twilight. And i love those books so im ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Eve
Rain fell onto our new metal roof. I could hear it splashing down, not caring that I was trying to sleep. I still held my razor blade firmly in my ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Mr. Darcy or Mr. Cullen?
Edward all the way..and i know there are a lot of people out there going "Why on earth would you pick him? He is controlling and watches people sleep!" I ...
Feb 12, 2009
