georgewright1989

hmmmmm, not really poetry i'm thinking

loved it! very short and snappy but extremely engaging at the same time, your only 14 as well lol!

i like it, tender and well constructed :-)

thanks for the feedback - wasn't too sure about it but i just penned it in a few minutes and was just looking for a bit feedback/advice. cheers :-)

this is my first ever poem so constructive and honest feedback would be good! A Land where the skies are as blue as the seas, A Land where man walk ...