george-oram

You stayed up all night, mapping the world on your palm, wishing the constellations to move, yearning for the tea leaves to reveal their hand. Uncertainty seizes hold, as you ...

Thanks for the kind words. I was kind of worried about the start actually, I just never got round to sorting it, I might do now though, thanks

Sometimes I wonder why, why I step on a damp, oozing mire in nothing more than a pair of shorts and a jersey to protect me. Rugby is, well, dangerous ...

I really like this, I really do. Your word choices are good for the most part, there is one or two real nit-picks I can find though, although, they might ...

Poetry is something I have always meant to have a crack at, but have never really given a go. I normally write short stories and flash fiction, but I have ...

hey! fancy a short story? Thank you so so much :) Its a first draft so be extra nit picky ;) thanks

Hey :), you seem to want a review, and ill happy supply you with one ;) title: Refugee. (although, im currently thinking of a more inventive title) word count: Around ...

Hey there :):) Fancy having a look at a short story? Its a first draft, so I need help on everything! I know i need to develop my character descriptions ...

Hey Anzius, Fancy having a gander at my short story? Its only a first draft so everything will be greatly appreciated, I know I need to work on character description, ...

Hey there Incognito, Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! I agree with everything you've said and will definitely be making some amendments, to be honest, I thought I ...

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hey there, I really liked this short piece, and yes, although it does a little more description on why you dislike society, I can relate to it better. It doesn't ...

Hey there, I really enjoyed this work! It is so original, and I had such fun reading it. The idea of a cartwheeling carrot drew me in, I just love ...

I really enjoyed this too! I could relate to all of it, and was not phased by the length. I too am like this with English, bullshitting is just a ...

Hello, I suppose as I'm here I should say a little about myself. Well, my name is George. I'm 15, from the South of England. I love playing rugby, cricket ...