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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Soul of Fame

    hey, so i really liked your work but there were some things here and there i'd like to point. ".........transition from one form" this line seems incomplete i think it ...

    Thu Aug 16, 2012 3:00 pm


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
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