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For those who knew and cared for TYWC's Senor_saurkraut, aka Robby Sowell, he passed away in January 2009 at the age of twenty one. Words can't say. You were loved.

Taken 02/02/09, near my college in Cambridge, UK. There's something about the bicycles: stolid in the cold, over-snowed by the languid back of winter. Femurs disenjointed, forgotten for the now, ...

Mrs. Reynolds wakes to the sun and a pale arm locked around her neck. The bed is warm where her skinny body has lain throughout the night; warm also from ...

This is rated R solely for the use of profanity. The setting is Singapore, so you might not recognize some words, or the grammar of the spoken English. The Esplanade ...

Thanks Matt. I took note of what you said and changed the period in the first line to a ruptured '--' that wraps up the first line and begins the ...

Thanks Matt. I took note of what you said and changed the period in the first line to a ruptured '--' that wraps up the first line and begins the ...

Just read Clo's review the whole way through and realised she said much the same thing I did about showing not telling. Told you you'd probably heard it before! One ...

You describe things quite well: good job. Without going into the nitty-gritty criticisms, I think the major thing this story lacks is something that happens. I kept waiting to be ...

V for Vendetta. Okay, not quite, but I just had to say it. V for Vanity Fair, by William Makepeace Thackeray, which I should have read by now...

Having enjoyed your poem about Drew Morrison, I thought I'd check out your other work. I liked this poem a lot less, unfortunately, though the style of yours that manages ...

I see! You cleared this up extremely well. I did notice Drew Morrison's surname, but I didn't make the connections you did because to me a last name was still ...

Right, I'm just going to give a relatively detailed critique on the first poem, but many of my criticisms also apply to no. 2 and 3. The quality of this ...

Different than Vince or Molly or Max Different than Sally or Dave or Fred Different than all the things That the nameless town had Very deftly done there. One thing ...

Is English your second language? It seems awfully odd to me that someone who wrote this gritty, touching piece would be unclear on how to spell 'customer.' Your sense of ...

Cute. Annoying, but cute.