gauravkundu32

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The poem is written from Philip's view. Anyway Keep patience and you'll get to know why i made him write like that :) thanks for the review by the way:)

I'm so happy to hear your words. Now you may hope to get something better than this next time soon .This work is completely inspired from my own real life ...

Thanks for your review:)

I'm glad to hear your words. Thanks :)

Thanks :) I'll keep in mind and edit those lines and rethink about how to frame sentences next time.You may hope to get more excitement next time.

Thanks a lot for the review, okay I'll keep in mind whatever you've said , next time :)

Thanks for the review and yes the rectified error in the passage has been noted :) hope to get a better piece of work next time.

Hey Jordin, Thanks Man for your review. Regarding your questions, you'll be answered soon, have patience :)

I'm so glad to hear that you like it. Thanks for the explanation. It's similar to what I'd thought while I was writing this, so my motive seems to be ...

Hello there , this is a boy from the Future to review your poem............ At first I'd like to say that this poem is great and contains a great message ...

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