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Oops... sorry! Here it is, sorry it's so long :)

Hi! Could you maybe check this our for me? It's the second chapter, but you don't have to read the first. Here's the link work.php?id=93196 Thanks! :)

I hope this helps :) So... who's next?

Hey everyone! :D I'm a little bit new to this all, so please bare with me if the reviews take a while! I'll try to do them in as much ...

My first impressions of your writing is that it is a very unique storyline and that both the plot and the characters have lots of potential :smt001 However, I thought ...