garverash

I was kind of dissatisfied after reading this. It felt very bitter and a little self indulged. Coming from a bad home I understand the feelings your writing about and ...

I like this, its easy to relate to. We are feel things because we are human but we write about them because we are vain. My only advice would be ...

Your story was dramatic and captivating but at times it felt too dramatic. The simple, but accurate, text messages made the character appear naive. The shallow nature of texting contributed ...