gamechanger10

I wish I could be Perfect. It was a long winter day and everything was good. I couldn’t wait to shoe (show) my dad my report card, Because all “A’s ...

nice job, speaker head. put your internal music on pause. this is an interesting idea. try to follow up with your bursting creativity. it sounds familiar, but i don't know ...

this was a really beatiful poem. as the angel of death said, you're a great poet. i've never read any of your work (but i just joined yesterday). and i ...

I really like this piece a lot. I read it a few days ago, but didn't have the heart to point out some of your mistakes, so I just didn't ...

I really like the passion and emotion (thats kind of rhetorical) in this piece. It reminded me of a book that I read a while ago called A Stone In ...

Well...I'm not sure what to say about this. As you said to Nolan, you work in abstract, so the concept depends on how it is recieved. I don't think I ...

Okay, so here's the deal; I'm not going to diessect (i spelled that wrong) your every sentence. Otheres have done that enough. :wink: But I will say that several of ...

this poem is to speak. it has a nice, soft flow about it that is--in a way--calming. thats about all there is to say. Beautiful work. Good job. :D

this was really deep. i felt the emotions rushing forward and all that good stuff. there's not much else to say about this piece. as the reviewer prior to me ...

This was an...um...interesting piece of work... :? you're last line is a little strange and almost awkwardly fitting in with the rest...you might want to rewrite that--if anything. The concept ...

This was a wonderfully written piece. Nice work! there were a few spelling issues that LilSarahBreezy pointed out, but all in all, this was a very enjoyable poem. KEEP WRITING!! ...