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Great poem, i Really liked it. Short, sweet and to the point. I don't know how to explain it, but you're poem was able to encapture everything that i've been ...

“17 to 1” I hate the way we met Because it shouldn’t have happened If I had listened to what I had been told Then I never would have gotten ...

whoops that wasnt supposed to be one giant mass of writing...ill make sure to seperate it next time. Thanks so much for the feedback :)

I thought it was amazing, i love your writing style. For a first time writing poetry, you nailed it :) Keep up the good work

I liked the original but I LOVED this funny, it definitely pulls you in right away. It was a very interesting format. I've read books in letter and email format, ...

That was pretty spectacular... I didn't see any mistakes, everything was pretty great. Just a few grammar things here and there. But the story was very touching, i love that ...

Wow, that really makes you think. It will definitely take me a while to decipher who "they" are. But overall, i really like the passionate language you used and you ...

[Chapter 1] First of all- and I might as well say it now- I don’t have a father. I have never met him. I don’t know what he looks like, ...

That was great, i was laughing to myself all the way because I got my permit a few months ago and I can still remember my mother's temper tantrum when ...

That was amazing. When i got to the end, I'll admit, my eyes were tearing up a little bit. I'm a sucker for poetry and it was cute in the ...

I generally liked it but i felt that you were leaving a lot out; even when you're writing poetry, you want to draw the reader into some sort of story. ...

First of all, that was a great story. Your writing style reminds me a lot of my own. The theme with heartbreak is very universal and you've got to be ...

This started out as a school project for my history class when we were learning about the Greeks and Romans. I was really bored one day, this was when I ...

The 3rd of November 476 BCE Dear Diary, It is a great privilege to have an entire book to myself to record my feelings, for no one understands me. My ...

I really hope that you continue with this story, it's amazing so far. I'm really curious about what happened to her sister. The way you lead the reader into that ...