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Re: Holocaust of the Future
It was good. I could feel the drama. I would try to talk a little bit more about what the character is feeling. She just seems sort of numb. Unless ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Dawn
This fits under so many categories i didn't know where to put it. Here is the first chapter, it is a rough draft so, don't judge me. Chapter 1 Korah ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: A Promise
i agree last line ?
May 9, 2011