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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Forgottens-Episode 1-Part one

    Alright, so if you haven't read my very messy Introduction to the series (it was posted a long time ago) you may want to do that. I haven't edited it ...

    Aug 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Diary of A Survivor Entry 1 (Rated 16+ for V & L)

    Good evening! I'm Regan, your reviewer for today. Red is gorrections and lets make..... this color the good things. I'll highlight the word/phrase then comment about it bellow the paragraph. ...

    Aug 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mama, wake up!

    Hi! My names funkyreg, and I'll be your reviewer. I work summers and fridays at a preschool, so I have a pretty good idea what goes through a childs mind! ...

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: deleted

    Corrections in red what I like in Green Psst! Frightened, I jumped a little from You jumped from your bed? Like you jumped out of it? Maybe in ? my ...

    Aug 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Forgottens

    Amazing! I loveeeee it!!!!!!! The small nipicks are covered in previous comments, but I love the plot. I can really relate to this story. (As in all the unfinished stories ...

    Aug 20, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Golden Key Chapter 2

    Hey, It's Regan again! I have to warn you know, you might want to work on your commas more! Don't take it personal!!! I would like to thank for the ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Golden Key

    This is a story about a few things, I couldn't quite choose a genre so I decided to go with the one that it was mostly made up of. Kick ...

    Jan 7, 2010


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
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