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Re: The Forgottens-Episode 1-Part one
Alright, so if you haven't read my very messy Introduction to the series (it was posted a long time ago) you may want to do that. I haven't edited it ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: The Diary of A Survivor Entry 1 (Rated 16+ for V & L)
Good evening! I'm Regan, your reviewer for today. Red is gorrections and lets make..... this color the good things. I'll highlight the word/phrase then comment about it bellow the paragraph. ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: Mama, wake up!
Hi! My names funkyreg, and I'll be your reviewer. I work summers and fridays at a preschool, so I have a pretty good idea what goes through a childs mind! ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Corrections in red what I like in Green Psst! Frightened, I jumped a little from You jumped from your bed? Like you jumped out of it? Maybe in ? my ...
Aug 25, 2010 -
Re: The Forgottens
Amazing! I loveeeee it!!!!!!! The small nipicks are covered in previous comments, but I love the plot. I can really relate to this story. (As in all the unfinished stories ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Golden Key Chapter 2
Hey, It's Regan again! I have to warn you know, you might want to work on your commas more! Don't take it personal!!! I would like to thank for the ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Golden Key
This is a story about a few things, I couldn't quite choose a genre so I decided to go with the one that it was mostly made up of. Kick ...
Jan 7, 2010
