funkypanda

this is really good work. I love reading about the plague (don't ask why) and this was really satisfying. a great storyline, some well described emotions. Apart from a few ...

Whoa. This is weird, yet encapturing and something that kept me reading. It has a feel at the beginning that things will not go smoothly, which gets the reader to ...

Whoa. That was truly encapturing and every single moment was breathtaking. You cleary have a gift for writing. One thing I would say to improve was to include more description ...