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Re: Life Expectancy #2
The next morning dawned with heavy blows of reality to each person. No one wanted to do anything, say anything or eat anything. Only after much convincing did Lucy make ...
Jun 11, 2007 -
Re: Engima
quite the poem you could have found some bigger contrasts to emphasizzzzz your point a bit better. Pretty good all in all ERIn
Jun 9, 2007 -
Re: Color
why thank you.
Jun 9, 2007 -
Re: Deep Within the Heart
(I admit this is a write as you go poem.) best kind. It's a...nice poem. No, really. I doesn't really say much. It sounds good, but does it feel good? ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Color
The Skies burst with color. Orange, green and then yellow. They screamed out for anyone to hear. “Come and catch us” they cried. They called, pleaded. The children ran. I ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: chapter one-untitles stuff
hi. It was quite good and intriguing. But i've got a few things. 1) you've got to be carefull about your spelling. 2) There's a lot of places where you ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Sacrifice
Sorry about the lack of names... The streets were crowded with people all moving in one direction: away. Boy moved against the surging crowd. He walked with determination; his head ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Block
ah writers block. My favorite thing. Not. Please no. Erin loves art. That's right, any kind of art, pastels, water color, clay, sewing (that's an it not?) even those random ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
If you were offered money to withhold vital information to the authorities, Would you do it? Well, considering there aren't really any authoriries.... ~ Caleb I wouldn't take the money, ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Speak for Yourself
Erin has a big jar of people she writes about. I'm really only one of those people. I'm Caleb. I'm 21 (old enough to drink). I play soccer...or did. Gosh. ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Do I what? Uh...I don't...no." ~ Caleb. I do."~Isaac. "Go away Isaac"~Caleb HOW LONG WOULD YOU RUN TO GET AWAY?
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Maximum Ride
love these books! Still wating to read the 3rd though!
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Life Expectancy #1
It was the summer of 2007. Everyone was back from college and done with school. Jesse was back from Iraq and Lucy was trying to get a job as St. ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Paracelsus - Prologue
... don't know what to say. It kinda left me...without words. Have you ever read the short story called the Lottery? By some...one...a girl i know. This story reminded me ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Heartless Beasts
one question: do you ike writing about all this? I mean, it sounds like a good set up for a novel about a group of the last humans ever, fighting ...
Jun 8, 2007
