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Hello there, your story is nice and full of description about gaming but to me, it's seems too much. Maybe not more actions but turn it into a story as ...

Yo. I'm here again, this is story is nice. As I'm not good in critique, i don't and I just read and see if i like it. And you passed ...

This is so nice and warming. Good story!

Just as everyone, including Danny and those classmate were preparing the marriage for Lan and Huo, the gangster family (Huo’s family) gathered and discussed something… ----------------------------

In the complicated world of demon and heaven and human, on this beautiful day, two innocent babies had come into this world. This is their seventh lifetime, the most critical ...

This is nice and I want to know more about Lilla, write more. This is good!

Thanks for the comments and the changes you make. I guess if i pass this on to my previous English teacher, she would shoot me from the start till the ...

This is a nicely written story. please do continue. thanks

This is a nice story but i have to admit that those in caps, i don't understand what they mean. Perhaps give some explanation when you add them in your ...

Hey this is a great story and i think the title fits into the story. Continue it! I want to know more..the ending if there is.

This is nice and cute!

Hello and I've read through the story. Its kinda cute when you write both diaries as one story Its funny when the girl say its quite expensive for the diary ...

haha, this is a nice prologue, sometimes people write prologue and I don't really understand what is that. Today, you give me an idea of that and it's nice I ...

Hello there, I have read your story and I thought you are referring to boyfriend and it come out to be a mum. It's nice though and I like it. ...

This is indeed a great story you have here. To be frankly speaking, I didn't read part one so i started on this one. But i'm following nice and i ...