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Re: Missions United Chapter 2: Choices
"Eugene...Eugene...Eugene..." Melea kept repeating the names as she walked back home. The final test was over and she had mastered all the fighting skills she needed for being an assassin. ...
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: Missions United Chapter 1: Final Test
Melea had finished her training in the forest and was ready for the final test. "So, have you ready?" said the head master as he appeared suddenly in the forest. ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Missions United Plot
This is a series of story whereby it mostly surrounded by two mission agents called Melea and Eugene. Both of them known each other from their head master, who was ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Reichkristallnacht
Wow! This is great, especially for the escape part. I thought a kid like the lead will just stay at home but instead, he ran out of the house. Are ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Imagine... a WW2 novel
Wow..! This is great and sad and touching..Hmm..perhaps I didn't read enough, why is the guy in their house basement? The guy stayed there for his safety or just to ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: The last of Krash
Well, I liked the story and it's very exciting. The plot is interesting and I mainly don't care about grammar if I am to read a wonderful story. Then, if ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Freedom (1)
Hello there, I guess this story is a quick one. I just hope that there are settings in the story, about the location, the description of the scene. But the ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: cold sweat
Wow..really a cold sweat..are you going to continue?
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: Little Wonders
Hello there, although it's short but its nice to be good bonds with brothers. But...I wonder why is the title as "Little Wonders"? Is the wonder means the relationship between ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: For to have Faith is to have Wings
Wow, you have written well there. I can totally understand how is it to be alone during those breaks and I liked it when you mention something which I everyday ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: The Hunted (Chapter 1)
Nice..I'm sorry to spam this story again. i liked it when those girls believe..normally in other stories, people don't believe such thing even though there is evidence and things like ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Hunted
This is nice and I like it. The mysterious starts where a dream becomes true and the painting scene. I like those things and a good story you have here.
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Inspiration Day.
Wow..you get inspiration but going out and meet things..For me, I just imagine and ideas just came to me..perhaps when I lost the idea, I will also need to go ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: There Once Lived A Girl...
Erm..the story is sweet and I liked the first paragraph though it was simple but it gave a nice introduction. But the next few things are simple and I thought ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: The Imaginary Prologue
“Who are you?” I said in a low voice as a black figure lurking in the white space. She didn’t reply. She just stood there as if waiting for me ...
Jun 23, 2010
