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Oh my gosh you are just a genius!!!!! I could not stop laughing the entire time! Immediatly I could tell this story would be immensly hilarious and it was! The ...

Wow this poem is excellent. I would only make a few changes. The third stanza doesn't seem to flow though. Your use of literary devices are pretty good and your ...

Wonderful poem. Very deep and extremely original. I can feel your emotions and passion for writing.

Oh my goodness. This poem is excellent you are an amazing writer! This poem is very similar to something that happened to me last year, and I got around it ...

This is extremely good! I love your wording and how you kept the reader in suspense. Your imagination is absolutely amazing. Creativity is key in this story and I love ...

Totally awesome! This song honestly made me laugh out loud! Very entertaining I really like the lines No, you don't have time to up date the status on your Facebook ...

Good work. The poem was very intense. I was hooked immediately by your first line and kept wamtimg to read. Excellent vernacular and figurative language. It was intruiging and deep ...

Wow. This is really deep. I love your use of figurative language and i could feel you in your writing. Very personal/

The last seconds of the day drags on The bell rings. And the day is at an end. I walk into the dark shelter that is supposedly my home. It ...