fruityfortissimo

It was lovely. it’s a bit like clockwork, the way she Okay i absolutely love the first two lines. A good hook. moves through the quadrants of her tidy little ...

This piece was beautiful. It was very original and creative. I loved your use of personification. I saw a tree move I don't know about this line. It seems to ...

These are really cool! Did you edit these to bring the light out? They look solarized! Awesome! :)

This is so adorable I love it! Hey. Here, a poem. xD Hope you like it, but tear it apart if you want. ;) Silly me, I'm back here, again ...

Haha I am not confused, but its probably because I took this poem and interpreted it in my own way. I love this poem because I can relate. Its simple ...

Oh my gosh this poem is absolutely amazing I loved it! I think the flow and the rhyme scheme is perfect and I love how you put so much of ...

Beautiful. Sick. So much detail it is amazing how in depth on the topic this poem is. No changes needed. Keep it up please.

Hahahah I love this! MONSTERS! :) It was very creative and Represents scared children everywhere! I think that this is the one thing that we all felt as little kids ...

Very creative. I like that you acknowledge the fact that being a write set us apart from everyone else! Nobody ever does and its about time! I love how you ...

Wow. This poem is just absolutely amazing. I have absolutely no criticism. It is so twisted and demented yet....beautiful. I desperately want to know what the purpose of this poem ...

Wow. That was EXCELLENT. It was kind of, I don't know, demented? It had this haunted atmosphere to it that really added a pained effect. At first I didn't really ...

All I am going to say is, that was odd.

I liked this poem because it was very quick and straight to the point. I loved your extended metaphor. The only part that bothered me was where it said, fluttering ...

Standing in a room full of mirrors, each with a different reflection. Which reflection is mine? A captive to the darkness, swallowed by bitterness. No way to survive. I no ...

This is great! I love your whole fight fire with fire line. Very true. All these reasons are valid and very agreeable. The fact that it has all the perks ...