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Wow this poem was really good! I loved the truth in your writing, yet the simplicity of it. The only thing was the flow was kind of off. But other ...

Fruity again! Okay seriously I LOVE this story! I keep reading and every time I just want to read more! And I can't be sure but I think I know ...

Hey! Me again! Once again I am impressed. I love what you're doing with the character, but I think she could have a bit more depth. If this was just ...

Hey its fruity! Okay once again I want to know more. This is a very captivating story thus far. Only thing I have with this part is what captaindomdude said, ...

Hey fruity here! Okay, already from the beginning I'm hooked. I can tell from the immediate danger that this is going to be a great story, and I absolutely cannot ...

Jashy, that was truly amazing. You are an extremely talented singer, songer writer, guitarist, etc haha you're amazing and that song was beautiful

It may or may not be very good, just lemme know what you think please! Forgive Forgive the infant girl that cries, New to the world, She's terrified. Forgive the ...

OH MY GOD THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D

Hello there. I feel is poem has a lot of potential, but it needs more detail. It isn't exactly simple, it just is missing a lot. Try expanding it, and ...

WOW! Girl this rocked! I really like how it was very simple, but at the same time it left the poem open for interpretation. And those who wear their hearts ...

Once again guys, I was angry when writing this so it probably isn't that good. Let me know what you think! Like a knife, They cut through the truth. Everything ...

All true. haha sorry if that was creepy i was trying to get the crap he wrote off of here

These pictures were nice. It looked like you had a good camera to work with as well. I like the second one the best. I am not ashamed to say, ...

Hahah these are cute! My favorite one is the third. I don't know why you would be disappointed with the first. I think it was quirky and very creative. You ...

These are so cute! I wish I had any artistic talent! I can't even hold a brush! Yikes! I really like thes paintings. You said you used watercolor? I think ...