frenchpastry

Wonderful writing. ;) But you're right, it is typical. The 'Love-Hate' relationship is very prevalent in the Romance genre. Not saying that that's bad. It's just... over-used. And of course, ...

So, who will start the new thread? ;)

It's okay. ;)

I have to agree. More paragraphs would be nice. ;) It will present your story better. Anyway, on to the critique. The dying screams of her mother still echoed in ...

Haha, sure. ;)

I say there should be another group of vampires and werewolves who are trying to use their condition for pure evil. And our job is to stop them. Not really ...

"Zombies," Bill said, and together, they all raced into the kitchen. Marlene pulled at Bill's arm, making him stop in his place. "Bill," Marlene said, a determined look on her ...

I was posting it for everyone and the author. ;) Hopefully, he'll reply soon.

Maybe we should start this over, hm? Create a new topic for it and start right off with the story, so everyone can rejoin (or join now). ;)

"So, that's it? That's all we're going to do?" Marlene asked, sighing. She wanted to do something now, not sit around waiting for it to happen.

"How do you know if there's more than one zombie? There might not be many at all!" Marlene smiled then. "I say we overpower them and take them down! Who's ...

Marlene jumped off Slade's back as they entered the house. "Thanks!" "No problem," he said, grinning. Marlene looked at Kathy and Bill. "So, what's the plan?"

Completely wonderful, and sadly romantic. ;) *Applause to you* for writing the best Snape poem, in my opinion, in the world.

Marlene stopped, panting heavily. These people moved fast- way faster than her atleast. She blamed her bathrobe. It was rather long, and she tended to trip on it at times ...

"Okay," Marlene said, nodding her head. "And what do you suppose we'll do when we get there? Just tell the cops what's going on?" Marlene stopped, frozen in her place ...