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Re: Totally Cliche Action Story!
"He's probably completely wasted." Marlene told the guy as the man who had tried to attack her came toward them. "You distract him while I call the cops, okay?" Before ...
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Re: Speak
I saw the movie, and am still looking for the book. The entire plot was powerful. I absolutely loved it. It's one of my favourites. If you haven't seen the ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Totally Cliche Action Story!
Marlene Age: 17 Height: 5'4 Hair: Medium-length, Brown Eccentric, Outgoing, Determined It was almost midnight when Marlene heard mutiple 'thumps' against her window. Muttering angrily under her breath
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Just Another Girl
I always said That I couldn't like you I even thought That I should've hated you But my mind's only playing Games with my heart again This part seems kinda ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: A Prologue of sorts?
I'm not very good at critiquing, but I do want to say that this introduction really caught my interest. My first thought was 'What happened? What's going on?', which in ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Boring little me
Isn't Instant Star the best? I'm obsessive! I'm not sure if that's good or not.
Jul 28, 2007
