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This was absolutely beautiful. I actually teared up in the end when i saw how he died. You're very talented. Just an amazing story.

Thanks for the advice! I will be sure to do that for the next thing i write! (:

Thanks so much! (L: Guess I learn to type a little slower and review my work more carefully!

Thanks you guys this really helped me a lot! I appreciate it so much! For part 2 I will make sure to take in all this advice(:

Good job girl! Im not really that big of a fantasy fan but this was pretty good. I wished it was longer though (: keep at it!

I really liked this story. It was cute in the not usual way. You could be a little more descriptive in describing this Teo kid but other than that great ...