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Re: Lost at Sea
Hey! I thought this poem was really impressive. I loved how you used repetition with the whole I walk this street alone that was very clever. Your use of symbolism ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: 11:11 11/11/11
I only really have one word to describe this poem... AMAZING. I read it like six times because I was so impressed especially when I saw that you were only ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Dead Romance
Hey there bookworm! After reading your piece several times I thought it was good. The flow of it was a little off and once i felt confused but overall I ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Starlit night
This was actually pretty good and I am very impressed. I thought the whole thing had a very nice flow to it and it kept me interested throughout the whole ...
Nov 12, 2011
