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Re: Hey Sarah, if you can read this, it's Dante
Haha! Shauni: Yes! Dante is one of my bestestis friends at school :) tnme2: He plays snare in a marching band. I think? xD I don't know; you'll have to ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Hey Sarah, if you can read this, it's Dante
DANTE! AHHHH! *flips out of chair* I knew you'd join! Anyways, ta da! I'm here as promised to greet you! Here at YWS, we have some rules. I know you ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Incog's Tempting Reviews
Incog! Could you do a poem for me?! Merci in advanced!
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Hey...
Hi Emily! *glares at location* How come every gosh-darn writer on here is from England?! Do I have to live in the most boring city in Canada ever? *cough*unjust*cough* Anyways, ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Writer ... in ... DISGUISE!
Hey there! Grr.... it seems that Kat and Mars have stolen part of my intro speech. Oh well :) I'll improvise. So, I'm Fragile, and welcome to YWS! Did you ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Halo
Hi there! I really liked this poem. It was an exceptional piece of work you should be accredited for! A lament echoes. I think you should change that to "A ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Realize
I agree with Flower... It has a good message, but the poem just doesn't flow. Right about at "Flaws cause problems ", I got a little bored with the poem, ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Day vs. Night
To my All Star Band, whose one (and only) terrible performance inspired this piece. :D For angels-symphony's contest Dark versus light, fighting to oust. No way to tell Who will ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Than You
This was a very great and powerful poem. It caught me on the front page. It portrays a teenager's life quite well, considering a lot of teenagers feel neglacted and ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Newish
Hi there! I'm Avery, or fragile_heart(!) As Kat mentioned, there are a lot of anti-twilighters. If they say something to you, please don't mind them. Don't take anything negative serious ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Background Check Center
:shock: Thunder, that's...ridiculous! I haven't read any of the other posts, so excuse me if this is already touched upon, but my friend's dad is a screenplay writer, and he ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Redemption. Part One
Hi there! Here's your review! This is my first advanced review, so bare with me!
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Holy reviews, Batman!
Finito, m'lord!
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: And there was drum roll chapter 1 part 1
Hi there! Here by request! Comments Title : Your title was good, at least for me, since I'm a band geek. Intro : Your intro was very excellent! At first, ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Souless [Chapter Two]
Thanks to everyone who posted in previous posts! Your comments are greatly appreciated and helped immensely! :D
Jun 7, 2009
