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Wow, this is really good beginning. I have to admit that I am intrigued. Where are you planning to go with this? I'd love to hear more. On another note, ...

(my first storybook. yay!) :D Name: Astra Reed Age: Physically 18; Chronologically 146 Race: Vampire Appearance: Oval shaped head with thin lips and mysterious eyes. Straight blond hair that looks ...

I liked this! I can completely emphasize. i think you ment run though instead of ran in your last stanza

"What do you want?" he said as he rubbed his eyes. The son was shining dimly. It had turned a pale pinkish-orange. He’d slept through the entire day. How about ...

Prologue: Awakening The morning sun escaped through the trees, shinning on the dark green forest bed. It hung just short of the center of the clear blue sky, awakening the ...

you know you're a writer when you go through an emotional turmoil, and you start forming sentences in your head as it's still going on . :] guilty as charged!

Amazing! You realed me immediatly! You really do a good job of portraying your characters through the dialogue, which is a key tip in writing. You should definitely continue, because ...

The summer night was hauntingly still. Nothing moved, not even the leaves covering the surrounding trees. That completely realed me in. You did a good job with your comparison: A ...

The summer night was hauntingly still. Nothing moved, not even the leaves covering the surrounding trees. That completely realed me in. You did a good job with your comparison: A ...

Hey! thanks for adding me, I feel welcomed already :] I'm a.... mix of a person. I really enjoy writing fantasy stories that have a hint of nascent romance. I ...

Hi there! I have to say, your story is definitely going somewhere. I'd love to hear how it pans out, and how the protagonist lives with Ruby. On another note, ...

Hello there, I'm a newbie, so spare me. My full name is Sarah-Avery, but I prefer to be called Sar-ayy. I am currently trying to finish a novel, which I'm ...

It haunts me. They chant in my head, over and over again, like the eerie hiss of a spell being cast. Their voices reach out like thick, lost fog, sweeping ...

Wow, my father has OCD, so I can really understand the prospective that you're coming from. I really enjoyed this, it was very dramatic and touching. Keep up the great ...