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Re: So, there was this thing...
Hey! I found out about that contest through Gotham Writers' Workshop, which is an exceptional course, might I add. I was looking into entering, but I ended up procrastinating too ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: New Moon Parody
oh my gosh, i like, died a little by laughing. Hmm.... I htink i'm missing a kidney. Oh well :] But you forgot the part about the VOLTURI! You have ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: The Thorn on the Rose
Honestly, you're probably the best thirteen year old poet I know. You work always gets to me. You can't improve perfection. Keep writing. You, my friend, have some real talent. ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: (Deleted by Author)
Sorry Guys! If you'd like to read the full post, check out Ward Four here .
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Running
Hey! Welcome to YWS! This was a good poem, but it was very short, so you might not get a lot of critique. "where will we begin?" W should be ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Saddest Book
The Outsiders and Living Dead Girl
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Fighting the cliché
This is awesome. I loved the whole cliche thing. I don't think I caught one error. Great job!
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Nancy Drew
Hi! Welcome to YWS. I am thirteen, and also like you, I was a newbie. I know what it’s like when you first join YWS, but let me just tell ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: The Elemental Gem (rewrite)
Hi Night Mistress First off, I like your choice of names. Very original. But, I just have to inform you that a prologue, like a preface, is a sneak peek ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
i know what you mean. They feel like that block your face. I totally agree. I usually don't take pictures with my glasses on. Everyone is beautiful ! And thanks ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: If you're really struggling...
I took a writing course, and it taught me a lot. One of the things I learned is when you're first starting out - starting out as a writing or ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: I just can't start.
My best friend's dad is a screen-play writer who just made his big debute. I was lucky enough to contact him before he got too busy, and he's given me ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: SoullessPreface (Redo)
PREFACE. - THE INNOCENT RIVAL. The figure that emerged gracefully from the shadows was outlined in midnight black silk. Even though I knew everything about her, every vile trait and ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
My new hair cut/color. I used to be a blond :3.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
what's the twilight upside-down contest? can someone PM me about that? i already commented your other copy, but props, my friend, for successfully making me pee my pants over something ...
Jan 5, 2009
