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When life gives you lemons, hand them to Jacob Jinglehimer Schmit. xD I don't know.

Short and sweet! I think you should add in a little piece about the smell.> I absolutely love the smell of a fresh rainfall. That wet soil and earthworms scent ...

Hi there, Matt! I noticed you play the halo series. My brother plays that, but I prefer Bioshock. Have you ever played it? It's my favorite game so far. It's ...

( My new story I'm currently working on. If anyone has an idea for a title, feel free to share. It does explain the Egyptian terms later in the story, ...

Rules : Nothing too sexual; keep it PG-13. Continue on the fragment above you however you like, starting with this: The rain came down in fat droplets, beating rhythmically against ...

I hate when people are absolutely against it without even reading it. Couldn't they have a little open-mindedness to pick it up and read it before they judge? I read ...

Bluenotes! (It's a store where I live, and they sell all sorts of Robot graphic t-shirts)

That was priceless. Hilarious! xD My favorite part: "Forks." "Spoons?" Because my friend called the Quillette (however you spell it) reservation spoons xD. I don't know, it just made me ...

Ew. He looks disgusting. Like that guy from the picture book 'The Sweetest Fig' or something like that. Yuck. *hurls* Never liked him in the first place. I heard he ...

Hi! I'm Avery, but my screen name is fragile_heart(!). I also write fiction and some poetry. I'm thirteen and love dancing too; I took ballet for nine years and jazz ...

Sorry! I was trying to get it all down quickly, so it got a little bland at the end. Sometimes I get caught up in my own stories and can't ...

This was really touching. I mean, honestly, there are so many thingsI want to list that I'm going to do point form :) -It was romantic and passionate with the ...

I agreee with xxcarly. There were a few grammar mistakes and it was a little robotic. Make it seem real. Create vivid images.

Good job! I agree with Monstar. Other than that, this seems like a pretty interesting story. It's not just the "I was mindlessly strolling along the street when BAMM! I ...

( Something I randomly wrote. Possibly one of the dirtiest things I have ever wrote. I'm not usually this dirty, but hey, a girl has her days! ) :wink: Lexii’s ...