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  • Art & Photography Re: Flowers. My first try at photography.

    Hi there! The brightness on this is a bit too...bright. Try darkening it to make the colors a bit more vivid. Good job for a first try, though! - fragile_heart(!)

    Wed May 27, 2009 10:13 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Flowers and a frog

    Hi there! 1. This photo was a bit blurry, but I like the blues and greens. 2. This one is cute :). 3. / 4. Beautiful! I love the macro ...

    Wed May 27, 2009 10:11 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Tom Kaulitz *cartoon style*

    Hi there! Tokio Hotel =

    Wed May 27, 2009 10:05 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Propane Pictures

    Hi there! 1. I liked the color splash, but you seem to have forgotten a spot right below the (sort of) light pink 'propane pictures'. 2. Your words go crooked ...

    Wed May 27, 2009 9:58 pm
  • Lyric Poetry Re: No More

    Hey! I'm fragile, here to the review rescue! Why did the Angles need him? Too soon it seemed He’d gone. Angles should be angels. :wink: Don't worry; a lot of ...

    Wed May 27, 2009 9:49 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: No one seems to read the sticky thread

    Hey! Oh yeah April? I've been here almost six months! Ha! :smt003 I'm pretty sure I welcomed you, too. Now look at you. All sophisticated, greeting others. *sniffle sniffle* They ...

    Wed May 27, 2009 9:30 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: new

    Hey! Well, since Colleen covered the rules, and Y took my back-up plan of explaining the moderators, I'll just explain the About the Authors section! The About the Authors section ...

    Wed May 27, 2009 9:25 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: I"M NEW

    Hi there! If you're looking for readers and input, you've definitely come to the right place. The Young Writers Society is a website totally dedicated to helping young writers make ...

    Wed May 27, 2009 9:20 pm
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Call of the Sea

    Rosey! :D I'm finally reviewing one of your stories. Sadly, I don't think I reviewed any of your previous ones. :shock: :( First off: Thalassa. How on earth do you ...

    Mon May 25, 2009 9:51 pm
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rosey's reviews

    Hey Rosey! Just reminding you :wink: xD And you don't have to review the whole thing. Thanks! :D

    Mon May 25, 2009 2:02 am
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Hi Jen! I'm Avery, and welcome to YWS! Since you've already read the rules, I guess I'll just skip that part of the typical welcome-new-members speech. Members with colored names ...

    Sat May 23, 2009 7:22 pm
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Ward Four

    (My ending is SERIOUSLY rushed, and I want to fix the romantic scene. It's just so blaze. Help?!) The morning sun escaped through the trees, awakening Ward Four from their ...

    Sat May 23, 2009 6:39 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: It's about time you knew me

    Me three. Tried out for ball throw, basketball, volleyball, badminton, 100m, relay, and long jump. Didn't make any. Gave up on sports, moved on to writing. I want to be ...

    Fri May 22, 2009 2:12 am
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey

    Hey Audrey! I’m Avery, and welcome to YWS! I’m sure you’ll love it here. Like Peanut said, posts can be deleted only if no one has replied to it. You ...

    Fri May 22, 2009 1:53 am
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Demon Street (1)

    Hahha, I literally just read your little snipit with the poll on it, so when I found this, I gasped. I really liked this. I liked the way you made ...

    Sat May 09, 2009 2:08 pm


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