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  • Art & Photography Re: Spring is in the Air

    Hey! When I saw that picture of the sunset, I thought of the song Ohio (Come back to Texas) by Bowling for Soup! "I bet she misses the sunrise..." Haha, ...

    Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:26 am
  • Art & Photography Re: The First of Spring

    Wow. I'd like to say "this one's my favorite!" but I honestly can't choose! They're all so beautiful, no word of a lie. I know that one of the rules ...

    Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:03 am
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Soulless [Chapter One, part 1]...

    Song(s): Le Disko - Shiny Toy Guns, Keeps Getting Better - Christina Aguilera, Welcome to the Jungle - Guns n' Roses Eat away! ---- Chapter One, Part One: The Race ...

    Sun May 31, 2009 7:26 pm
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anything Really (blame Nate for THIS title)

    I have to be honest: when I first read this, I didn't read too much into it, like Reyu, and thought it was one of those bad examples you read ...

    Sun May 31, 2009 3:07 am
  • Writing Tutorials Re: The 'Onion Layers' of Writing

    Onions, by far, are my favorite vegetable. Yes, it gives me horribly raunchy breath after wards that tends to ward off my friends – or any member of the public, ...

    Sun May 31, 2009 2:51 am
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime Digital Art

    Hey! I agree with WaterVyper. The eyes are good, but the hair is a bit big. It looks seriously teased, but straight, which is impossible. The left side is rather ...

    Sat May 30, 2009 6:38 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Beach

    Hey there! You've been to Hawaii?! I'm so jealous. :wink: My cousin lives there, in Honululu. The size of the photo completely stretched out the page. Maybe you could shrink ...

    Sat May 30, 2009 6:30 pm
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Delightful Devil (prologue and part of chapter 1 part 1)

    Hi there! They say that the past is a ghost, the future a dream, and all we ever have is now. My saying is backwards. The past is all I ...

    Sat May 30, 2009 6:09 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: fotografia

    Hey! I, II, and V are my top choices. They are simple and clear, and the colors are vibriant. III & IV are okay, but they aren't as "ka-pow" as ...

    Thu May 28, 2009 11:24 pm
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Question about Writers' Group

    You're so lucky! There are no Barnes and Noble in my area. :( If I were yo, I would take advantage of the offer.

    Thu May 28, 2009 11:13 pm
  • General Articles Re: I'll Always Be Weak

    Hey! This is my only nitpick: I remember wishing to be like you. Everyone loves you. Your charm and jokes hook every girl in the room, hook, line, and sinker. ...

    Thu May 28, 2009 10:39 pm
  • General Articles Re: This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You [1]

    Hey! The day you brother pulled up in front of our house and started loading all of our furniture into his van. 'You' should be 'your'. :wink: Over all : ...

    Thu May 28, 2009 10:31 pm
  • General Articles Re: Those Eyes (synopsis)

    I agree with Mars. Wouldn't Rachel be a little reluctant to let him go? If you decide to give Sage siblings, it could go two ways: i) Sage can be ...

    Thu May 28, 2009 10:18 pm
  • General Articles Re: God drives a 68 Cutlass Supreme

    Hello! Being a car freak myself, your title caught my attention. I agree with A.C.; the semi-colons seem to break it up a bit much. Other than that, there was ...

    Thu May 28, 2009 10:07 pm
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dusting Off Angels

    Evi! Your title reeled me in, because I am currently working on a story about Angels. I read the first sentence and was immediatly hooked. As I was reading, I ...

    Thu May 28, 2009 9:55 pm


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien