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Re: Spring is in the Air
Hey! When I saw that picture of the sunset, I thought of the song Ohio (Come back to Texas) by Bowling for Soup! "I bet she misses the sunrise..." Haha, ...
Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:26 am -
Re: The First of Spring
Wow. I'd like to say "this one's my favorite!" but I honestly can't choose! They're all so beautiful, no word of a lie. I know that one of the rules ...
Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:03 am -
Re: Soulless [Chapter One, part 1]...
Song(s): Le Disko - Shiny Toy Guns, Keeps Getting Better - Christina Aguilera, Welcome to the Jungle - Guns n' Roses Eat away! ---- Chapter One, Part One: The Race ...
Sun May 31, 2009 7:26 pm -
Re: Anything Really (blame Nate for THIS title)
I have to be honest: when I first read this, I didn't read too much into it, like Reyu, and thought it was one of those bad examples you read ...
Sun May 31, 2009 3:07 am -
Re: The 'Onion Layers' of Writing
Onions, by far, are my favorite vegetable. Yes, it gives me horribly raunchy breath after wards that tends to ward off my friends – or any member of the public, ...
Sun May 31, 2009 2:51 am -
Re: Anime Digital Art
Hey! I agree with WaterVyper. The eyes are good, but the hair is a bit big. It looks seriously teased, but straight, which is impossible. The left side is rather ...
Sat May 30, 2009 6:38 pm -
Re: Beach
Hey there! You've been to Hawaii?! I'm so jealous. :wink: My cousin lives there, in Honululu. The size of the photo completely stretched out the page. Maybe you could shrink ...
Sat May 30, 2009 6:30 pm -
Re: Delightful Devil (prologue and part of chapter 1 part 1)
Hi there! They say that the past is a ghost, the future a dream, and all we ever have is now. My saying is backwards. The past is all I ...
Sat May 30, 2009 6:09 pm -
Re: fotografia
Hey! I, II, and V are my top choices. They are simple and clear, and the colors are vibriant. III & IV are okay, but they aren't as "ka-pow" as ...
Thu May 28, 2009 11:24 pm -
Re: Question about Writers' Group
You're so lucky! There are no Barnes and Noble in my area. :( If I were yo, I would take advantage of the offer.
Thu May 28, 2009 11:13 pm -
Re: I'll Always Be Weak
Hey! This is my only nitpick: I remember wishing to be like you. Everyone loves you. Your charm and jokes hook every girl in the room, hook, line, and sinker. ...
Thu May 28, 2009 10:39 pm -
Re: This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You [1]
Hey! The day you brother pulled up in front of our house and started loading all of our furniture into his van. 'You' should be 'your'. :wink: Over all : ...
Thu May 28, 2009 10:31 pm -
Re: Those Eyes (synopsis)
I agree with Mars. Wouldn't Rachel be a little reluctant to let him go? If you decide to give Sage siblings, it could go two ways: i) Sage can be ...
Thu May 28, 2009 10:18 pm -
Re: God drives a 68 Cutlass Supreme
Hello! Being a car freak myself, your title caught my attention. I agree with A.C.; the semi-colons seem to break it up a bit much. Other than that, there was ...
Thu May 28, 2009 10:07 pm -
Re: Dusting Off Angels
Evi! Your title reeled me in, because I am currently working on a story about Angels. I read the first sentence and was immediatly hooked. As I was reading, I ...
Thu May 28, 2009 9:55 pm
