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Re: elllllo
Wow Hailey, your username is so creative. I guess I shouldn't be talking though, right? Mine is pretty stupid >.< Anyways, welcome to YWS. I'm Sarah, your greeter. Which means ...
Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:27 pm -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hi everyone! I'm back again. No promises I'll be too too active D:
Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:18 am -
Re: The Man and the Moon
Hi there! It took me a minute to realize the last part of the story was part of the song. *smacks forehead* Anyways, onto the review. Hands won't barely move ...
Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:26 pm -
Re: Tree in a Park
I agree with June; there isn't really a focal point in a tree. It's just one giant image. I love the color though; it reminds me of a crisp, green ...
Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:00 pm -
Re: Autumnal
Hey Splodey :D Long time no chat! Onto the review. 1) Perfect. Absolutley stunning. 2) The color is a little neutral. I suggest you make them a little more vivid. ...
Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:48 pm -
Re: Newbie!
Hey Sam! It's me, Sarah! I'm glad you took my advice and decided to join YWS :D Since everyone has covered the rules, mentors, and the basic q&a, the only ...
Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:40 pm -
Re: What I see from just my front door.
Hi there! 1, I love. 2 and 3, not so much. They just look out of focus, and it's kind of confusing because there's not really a certain point of ...
Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:38 pm -
Re: Cloaked figure
o_O Wow. This photo is great! I see that Kamas made the comment about her face, and I totally agree. The shadows are just a smidge too dark. Just a ...
Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:33 pm -
Re: UPDATE: Timestone Realities P2
WOW. So this review is going to suck. Just a fair warning. xD I was totally engrossed in your story that I didn't even look for mistakes. I loved how ...
Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:16 pm -
Re: deleted
Hi there! This is my first review in about...4 months? So, bare with me xD On the next day the villages pulled the canoe from the center of Kyentril back ...
Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:07 pm -
Re: Deleted
Hi there! This was short, but any longer and you would have overdone your point. So, I praise you on your size. Your vocabulary was good; there wasn't any words ...
Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:13 pm -
Re: For Vonnegut - Ego Tastes like Burnt Toast
Hi there! I am glass melting on sunburned skin; Now, I'm not too sure, so correct me if I'm it sun-burnt or sunburned? I'm not entirely sure... but they're falling, ...
Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:10 pm -
Re: Hey :D
Hi there, Sarah! My name is Sarah too :D Your opening quote really caught my attention. If you're looking for mad, you have definitley come to the right place. The ...
Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:02 pm -
Re: Greetings!
Clueless newbies are fun, but experienced newbies are cool. :D I'm with Hawkie on that one. And hey! Welcome to YWS! It seems like nobody has talked about the rules ...
Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:16 pm -
Re: Rabbit Syndrome
Do you review photgraphy? If so, here you are !
Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:24 pm
