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  • Welcome Mat Re: elllllo

    Wow Hailey, your username is so creative. I guess I shouldn't be talking though, right? Mine is pretty stupid >.< Anyways, welcome to YWS. I'm Sarah, your greeter. Which means ...

    Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:27 pm
  • Lounge, The Re: The "I'm Back" Thread

    Hi everyone! I'm back again. No promises I'll be too too active D:

    Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:18 am
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Man and the Moon

    Hi there! It took me a minute to realize the last part of the story was part of the song. *smacks forehead* Anyways, onto the review. Hands won't barely move ...

    Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:26 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Tree in a Park

    I agree with June; there isn't really a focal point in a tree. It's just one giant image. I love the color though; it reminds me of a crisp, green ...

    Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:00 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Autumnal

    Hey Splodey :D Long time no chat! Onto the review. 1) Perfect. Absolutley stunning. 2) The color is a little neutral. I suggest you make them a little more vivid. ...

    Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:48 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie!

    Hey Sam! It's me, Sarah! I'm glad you took my advice and decided to join YWS :D Since everyone has covered the rules, mentors, and the basic q&a, the only ...

    Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:40 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: What I see from just my front door.

    Hi there! 1, I love. 2 and 3, not so much. They just look out of focus, and it's kind of confusing because there's not really a certain point of ...

    Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:38 pm
  • Art & Photography Re: Cloaked figure

    o_O Wow. This photo is great! I see that Kamas made the comment about her face, and I totally agree. The shadows are just a smidge too dark. Just a ...

    Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:33 pm
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: UPDATE: Timestone Realities P2

    WOW. So this review is going to suck. Just a fair warning. xD I was totally engrossed in your story that I didn't even look for mistakes. I loved how ...

    Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:16 pm
  • Fantasy Novels Re: deleted

    Hi there! This is my first review in about...4 months? So, bare with me xD On the next day the villages pulled the canoe from the center of Kyentril back ...

    Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:07 pm
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Deleted

    Hi there! This was short, but any longer and you would have overdone your point. So, I praise you on your size. Your vocabulary was good; there wasn't any words ...

    Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:13 pm
  • Other Poetry Re: For Vonnegut - Ego Tastes like Burnt Toast

    Hi there! I am glass melting on sunburned skin; Now, I'm not too sure, so correct me if I'm it sun-burnt or sunburned? I'm not entirely sure... but they're falling, ...

    Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:10 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey :D

    Hi there, Sarah! My name is Sarah too :D Your opening quote really caught my attention. If you're looking for mad, you have definitley come to the right place. The ...

    Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:02 pm
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings!

    Clueless newbies are fun, but experienced newbies are cool. :D I'm with Hawkie on that one. And hey! Welcome to YWS! It seems like nobody has talked about the rules ...

    Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:16 pm
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rabbit Syndrome

    Do you review photgraphy? If so, here you are !

    Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:24 pm


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