foxy

Hi there! I love anything about love. If this had been a short story, it could have been a hit! I mean, immortal love has always been what young people ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this and I love the idea. It has potential. Although, I feel that it is to short.Are you going to add more to it? In the ...

I like this. The way you worded it was nice. As someone said before me, the ye's were confusing at first, but then I realized it was old english. I ...

Very breathy, very airy. I like it. Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed reading this. your review is very much appreciated ^^

I like your emotional style of writing; it is very nice, neat and tidy with no fluff to fill it in. It sounds honest, and I like the structure- the ...

Every time I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my soul drags me to the bottom of the ocean behind the soft sand until my breath becomes labored, and ...

Hi, Foxy! I'm glad that I'll be reviewing you today--err, tonight. :D/ Anyway, my comments will be in pinkish font. As always. :) There she was with her native village ...

Hi! I really like the way you write. Your grammar is excellent although you do have a tendancy to go "semi-colon happy"! Lol, I do it too!! Only a couple ...

This is really good :) great job :) Thank you so much, your opinion is appreciated

Hey! :) So, I like this, especially the description of Baira. Just a couple of nitpicks: There she was with her native village outfit, a piece of cloth tied round ...

Oh, I get it now. Pff. Wow, I should have seen that. Thanks. :) Hihihihih you are welcome :D

Hey there, Foxy. I truly love this so much. You've got some freakin' talent! :D Nitpicks: Everytime 2 Words (Every time) I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my ...

Everytime I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my soul drags me to the bottom of the ocean behind the soft sand until my breath becomes labored, and my ...

Thank you for your generous reviews. I will try my best to edit this. Your effort and time and very much appreciated. :)

I will take your challenge with great pride, you are on! I will change the phrase into something that will blow your mind off or I will simply change eyes ...