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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: I am not sentimental about firsts or lasts

    You wonder if they feel it like a slow burning itch deep within your muscles you absolutely have to get out, or if it is more like a jumping love ...

    Aug 16, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i will bury you in time

    ok neutral milk hotel title, i see you

    Aug 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forwardsbeckonrebound

    i always love your reviews, thank you :)

    Aug 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forwardsbeckonrebound

    thanks :D

    Aug 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forwardsbeckonrebound

    mirror emoji

    Aug 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forwardsbeckonrebound

    thank you :D

    Aug 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: forwardsbeckonrebound

    ah i hadnt noticed the simile usage until now, good catch :) thanks for the review & your feedback

    Aug 5, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sometimes you make people sad

    the last time i saw you, you wanted to go home. i hope you're there in that beautiful place you described. very evocative. reading this poem made me feel like ...

    Jun 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: icannevergoback

    thank you, i appreciate your comments a lot :D

    Nov 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: thesweetness&thelight

    thank you so much :) im glad those lines hit the hardest; they were my inspiration for actually writing the poem. to answer your question, i dont think its anything ...

    Oct 3, 2023


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