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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The B**** was about to get what she deserved

    Quote: She was too good for guy like him; she was the all American girl. She had blonde hair, blue eyes, nice tits, perfect smile, and most importantly amazing personality. ...

    Oct 28, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The B**** was about to get what she deserved

    One missed called Frank 4:20 am That should be centered and singled space....not sure how to do that on here.

    Oct 28, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The B**** was about to get what she deserved

    Here's a short story. Maybe R-Rated. I copied and pasted directly from my word document that has the correct formatting, but I'm not sure if this post is going have ...

    Oct 28, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Im Growing

    very cliche at the end. Also I read the poem with out I'm, and it sounded more less rigid. If your going for a repetitive beat keep it, but try ...

    Oct 28, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Vicissitudes--1. Alice

    "I only first met him when we were twelve, and while I’ve been best friends with him ever" I think the word first is awkward sounding. Also don't tell us ...

    Oct 28, 2008


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings