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True that i must quoted the bible. I do believe in the bible but i usually take more on reasons through various works rather than simply manifesting the facts through ...

okay, i will reply Loveless questions( which i pm to her) which is categorize into three topics: 1) Freewill 2) Eternal 3) Cain firstly, we got the idea of free ...

Thank you for replying. As well, i would like to apologized if this piece is confusing. This piece is not meant to be pure realism an i try to converge ...

yeah...thanks for the reply...the last line of the story is a bit of an was to be that Janilima is to look at an open window before descending down the ...

like the way you empahsize the first word of the sentence and the mood that comes with it. Other than that, i am confused with what the story is except ...

good, very good i like this new version. you got the mood, the description in it. you might just need a little more edit (i do not knwo what is ...

hey, jophrey, i am here again. i finally read the second part of the was long... well what i thought about the story is that it is a bit okay ...

its good...i like the way you wrote the story... i can feel the emotion being written down and that the mood was perfect for such a case. i can tell ...