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Re: The Risk-Taker
This was really good I enjoyed it a lot and I felt very connected to the protagonist, it really makes me want to know what happens next. One thing I ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: untitled
I am just going to throw a few questions out there. What status does Ayden have that allows him to romance Alla. And who is 'he' when Alla goes through ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Dawn
this is really good! and very powrful. I just have one thing that might make it more powerful. When you say lines like "like I am bleeding catistrophicly" (I know ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: The Gods Were Crying, Preface and CH1
hi I just thought I'd give a few suggestions: First of all, this is really good and you definitely have talent.well...here it goes hope this helps. "It was decided. Eylasia ...
Nov 1, 2008