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Re: If I Must Die
If I must go, then let me go In the gentle hush of falling snow, Kissed by winter's subtle chill, Becoming silence, soft and still. Loved that part :D . ...
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Re: Dark Sister
Apart, we cannot last. How well can you be, If I am not there to cast your shadows? Black, without white, we cannot see I Loved that line ! I ...
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Re: Abducted
ok, i worked three hours on this , then my browser closed which erased everything , and i forgot the whole thing .... now its horrible. i tried my best ...
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Re: Moonflower
I really liked this poem (: The detail and the flow of the poem is great ! I love reading your posts. Keep writing! :D -Forever alone.*
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Re: Stuff
I really liked this poem :D I enjoyed reading it . I love how you rhymed the words since I cant exactly rhyme words correctly (:
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: I Love You More
Ok, so this isn't so great actually....but I tried my best though.... (: When I hear your soothing voice, I smile and feel rejoiced When we are together, everything disappears ...
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Re: I fight
I really enjoyed the poem (: I like the whole story and i like how it was about a soldier fighting for a m e r i c a :D ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Morning With the Family
Aww, I love love love this one . Considering the fact that I never really have breakfast with my family anymore but I'd like to picture it which i was ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: The Sight : Premonitions
I read this book a few weeks ago , I enjoyed reading it . Here's my summary of it, sorry if its a little dull :( This book is about ...
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Re: Twilight
You're a great artist! I wish i was able to do that.
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Winter
I enjoyed this poem so much especially since it's winter and the holidays are coming up :D
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Suicidal Moon
Your poem was beautiful and touching . I was able to picture your poem because of your detail and the emotion you put into it. Great job :D
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Falling
Thanks for reviewing my poem (: I decided to read some of yours. I really liked this poem . Obviously better than mine ! :D You did great on this ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Hi (: I'm new .
I just signed up yesterday . When I was younger i really enjoyed writing short stories and poems. I'm a little rusty , but I'll catch on ! I hope ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Slowly I kill myself. . . well you know with reality tv
I loved this one (: I really enjoyed reading this so much! The details and the whole meaning is great! :D
Nov 29, 2010
