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  • Lyric Poetry Re: If I Must Die

    If I must go, then let me go In the gentle hush of falling snow, Kissed by winter's subtle chill, Becoming silence, soft and still. Loved that part :D . ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dark Sister

    Apart, we cannot last. How well can you be, If I am not there to cast your shadows? Black, without white, we cannot see I Loved that line ! I ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Abducted

    ok, i worked three hours on this , then my browser closed which erased everything , and i forgot the whole thing .... now its horrible. i tried my best ...

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Moonflower

    I really liked this poem (: The detail and the flow of the poem is great ! I love reading your posts. Keep writing! :D -Forever alone.*

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Stuff

    I really liked this poem :D I enjoyed reading it . I love how you rhymed the words since I cant exactly rhyme words correctly (:

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Love You More

    Ok, so this isn't so great actually....but I tried my best though.... (: When I hear your soothing voice, I smile and feel rejoiced When we are together, everything disappears ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I fight

    I really enjoyed the poem (: I like the whole story and i like how it was about a soldier fighting for a m e r i c a :D ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Morning With the Family

    Aww, I love love love this one . Considering the fact that I never really have breakfast with my family anymore but I'd like to picture it which i was ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Sight : Premonitions

    I read this book a few weeks ago , I enjoyed reading it . Here's my summary of it, sorry if its a little dull :( This book is about ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Twilight

    You're a great artist! I wish i was able to do that.

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Winter

    I enjoyed this poem so much especially since it's winter and the holidays are coming up :D

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Suicidal Moon

    Your poem was beautiful and touching . I was able to picture your poem because of your detail and the emotion you put into it. Great job :D

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Falling

    Thanks for reviewing my poem (: I decided to read some of yours. I really liked this poem . Obviously better than mine ! :D You did great on this ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi (: I'm new .

    I just signed up yesterday . When I was younger i really enjoyed writing short stories and poems. I'm a little rusty , but I'll catch on ! I hope ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Slowly I kill myself. . . well you know with reality tv

    I loved this one (: I really enjoyed reading this so much! The details and the whole meaning is great! :D

    Nov 29, 2010


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