flytodreams

Wow! It's very interesting, but I have a little question. If time had stopped, why did you write: Days had passed since Emma had climbed the fence out of Clearwater. ...

“I am Ixchel, flesh of two priests. I am Ixchel, who sits and the shrines at Cozumel and Isla Mujures and blesses the pregnant women who. . .I am Ivy, ...

Everybody hates Paolini...I just read the whole thread, and I agree, Paolini is so full of himself. I read Eragon and Eldest, and I liked both of them, but Eldest ...

I really liked it! When he's thinking revenge, that was my favorite part. You also did a good job describing the elven city after the humans burnt it down. Although ...

I like Ixchel's part, too! :) It was really interesting, and a little scary for me. She killed all the other gods and goddesses? That's really cool. Few mistakes in ...

Wow, your characterization is great. All the characters seem so real! :) That's my favorite part of the story. Now, either it's just me, or when they're talking about Jessica ...

The boy looked about two years older than herself, but had a knack of relieving people from their smaller possessions. Should it be 'from' or 'of'? She was about eight, ...

1. Harry because he's strong, and tough, and determined. (I have no idea how to put it) Eragon's...not like that. 2. Lord Voldemort because he's a cleverer, and better villain ...

As beautiful as it was, it had haunted him for his entire life. I think 'for' is unnecessary, but I'm not sure. Sorry if it isn't! He was quiet for ...